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Size matters

on Aug 17, 2010 in Carey, Copywriting, trends

I had an interesting meeting with a new client today. We often try and convince clients to try different approaches to engage their prospects and customers more. This client beat me to it. From the off they said that they wanted to tell a story to enthral the reader.

There was a time when whitepapers were long, technical pieces, often with a large element of blue-sky thinking; and case studies were quite in-depth reviews of a project. Driven by the perception of a time-poor audience, bombarded by thousands of marketing messages, we’ve seen pieces get shorter and shorter. But there are dangers in making everything shorter. Not only is there the risk of ‘dumbing down’ the message, but it can also take the human interest out of the story. Edited down to a curt list of bullet points, the customer and their story become implausible and impossible to emphasise with. Simplified to appeal to a broader audience, the whitepaper can become nothing more than a glorified brochure—that’s fine, but not when you are trying to demonstrate competence and thought-leadership to technical decision makers.

At HN we aren’t bound by industry-standard terms. We look at each project and agree with the client what length, tone and level of technical detail is most appropriate to the audience and therefore be best at achieving their objectives. Why not have a look at our article The resurgence of storytelling, or give us a call and put us to the test.

Have we forgotten the sizzle?

on Aug 12, 2010 in Carey, Copywriting

Are you familiar with the phrase sell the sizzle not the sausage? I sometimes think that in the rush to ‘sell’, the sizzle gets overlooked. From my personal experience I remember when my desk, sited on the floor above the office cafeteria, caused me to pile on pounds in just a few weeks after they [...]

Interesting musings on the English language

on Jul 1, 2010 in Carey, language

We are quite a geeky bunch at HN, or should that be nerdy. Working with this team of insatiably curious people is one of the reasons I love my job; we find all sorts of facts interesting and enjoy sharing a new discovery. I must say that most threads pertain to language or technology of [...]

A new game

on Jun 23, 2010 in Carey, online

A friend was recounting tales from a recent team-building course—you know the kind of thing where there’s construction of some mode of transport, usually to cross water, and biscuits available with every round of coffee. One of the early exercises was to pass a ball around the team such that every hand touched it. That [...]

Is it a brave new world?

on May 12, 2010 in Carey, online, trends

When you are in our line of work, you tend to do a lot of reading—and from quite diverse sources sometimes. A piece from the newsletter of a specialist media mergers and acquisitions organisation caught my eye this week.